Presentation and presentation outcomes

my presentation went well. I will use the medium of video with voice recording again as it helps with my nerves ( however is a little embarrassing listening to yourself)

my feedback from Peter was regarding some of the final touches on the floor plan; in particular the possible addition of a retaining wall and small courtyard in the eastern facade, lower mall level. this would provide more light to the lower level and also gives opportunities to grow some screening for the upper levels.

Overall im happy with both my presentation style and how it went. and on top of this I have learnt some new skills.